I'm reading Hatcher's proof of the group completion theorem, in A short exposition of Madsen-Weiss Theorem, Pages 36 ~ 42.
After Lemma D.3., Hatcher says that the total space is homotopy equivalent to $BM \vee BM$. I do not understand this.
As far as I understand, for a map $f : X \rightarrow Y$, the mapping cylinder is $M_f = X \times I \coprod Y \Big/ (x,1) \sim f(x)$ and from the way he defines fibrewise suspension, it looks like the fibrewise suspension is $M_f \Big/ (x, 0) \sim f(x)$ (So that we have $(x, 0) \sim (x, 1) \sim f(x)$). Is this correct?
So, if $f : X \rightarrow BM$ where $X$ is contractible, when we contract $X$ in $\Sigma_f X$, won't we get $BM \vee S^{1}$? [$X \simeq *$ is a point, so we get $S^{1}$ from $I$]
Also I do not understand why $\Sigma TM \rightarrow \Sigma_f ETM \rightarrow BM$ is a quasifibration. I don't see how he uses what he proved earlier (suspension of a homology isomorphism is a weak homotopy equivalence and Lemma D.1) [He says this just two sentences before Lemma D.3.]
$\textbf{Edit}$ : I believe he is doing the following :
He proves that the left action is a homotopy equivalence in the first paragraph on Page 40, i.e. $TM \rightarrow TM$ (multiplication by $m \in M$) is a weak homotopy equivalence. Taking suspension, $\Sigma TM \rightarrow \Sigma TM$ is a weak homotopy equivalence. In particular, right action by $m \in M$ is a homotopy equivalence, so, by Lemma D.1. (with $X = \Sigma TM$), $E\Sigma TM \rightarrow BM$ is a quasifibration.
Maybe $E \Sigma TM$ and $\Sigma_f ETM$ are somewhat related? But I can not see it.